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Comment on 2 More Character Bios Coming Feb 20 – and More! by Kristen

Kristen — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 17:52:33 +0000

Perfection takes time!

Comment on BX-12 by Calvin

Calvin — Wed, 05 Oct 2011 01:23:39 +0000

Well…LeCroy’s not finished that part either…I guess he’ll have to work on making it more ‘anatomically correct.’ Thanks for the comment!

Comment on BX-12 by Kristen

Kristen — Tue, 04 Oct 2011 01:46:25 +0000

I have to say the “area” of BX-12 is somewhat unsettling. I am a bit offended, Hugo and Anthony, by his hard(as in-metal) parts.

From an unperverted perspective- he looks great!!

Comment on BX-12 by Calvin

Calvin — Tue, 04 Oct 2011 00:40:15 +0000

Glad that see you find him a little unnerving! That’s exactly the feeling I wanted to leave people with. A hat? Well, LeCroy still needs to put some skin on him. Maybe he can give him a Mr. Potato face.

Comment on BX-12 by Andy M, USA

Andy M, USA — Mon, 03 Oct 2011 15:17:26 +0000

Sinister indeed. Perhaps form follows function. I’d be freaked to see this thing IRL. He needs a jaunty hat or something to tone it down a bit!

Comment on Chapter 72 by Gibraltar

Gibraltar — Sun, 10 Apr 2011 17:40:27 +0000

A poignant ending to a terrific story!

I thought the admiral pushed Seth too hard, given that the young man had already tarnished his reputation in the fleet and had his command pulled out from under him for six months in the proverbial penalty box. It’s not like Seth needed him to pile on the guilty, for pity’s sake!

And leaving the model behind was a nice way to subtly mark his territory, a little reminder to the acting captain and his crew that Darren Seth will be returning to Dragonfly.

Fantastic work on a complex, intriguing, and harrowing tale!

Comment on Chapter 71 by Gibraltar

Gibraltar — Sun, 10 Apr 2011 17:39:54 +0000

That was a touching scene, and despite the awkwardness of the situation, i think Seth handled it just right. Damn good advice he gave her, too.

Comment on Chapter 68 by Gibraltar

Gibraltar — Sun, 10 Apr 2011 17:39:15 +0000

A six-month relief of his command is a kick in the teeth to be sure, but Seth obviously needs time to get his head and heart straightened out after this fiasco.

The silver lining on this cloud is that he’ll be getting Dragonfly back, and Commander Ariele to boot!

Comment on Chapter 66 by Gibraltar

Gibraltar — Sun, 10 Apr 2011 17:38:10 +0000

Whew! Not sure exactly what to make of the kisses, but Jenovia’s pep-talk was exactly what Seth needed to hear and precisely when he needed to hear it. The missions that end in medals and accolades are the easy ones. The ones that end in doubt and self-recrimination are the missions that wake a captain up in the middle of the night years later.

Comment on Chapter 65 by Gibraltar

Gibraltar — Sun, 10 Apr 2011 17:37:19 +0000

Oh, man. After nearly a century of service to Starfleet, the starship Excelsior is no more. I’m torn between wanting to congratulate Santiago for having the principles to stick with his decision and go down with his ship, and wanting to condemn him for cowardice for not living to face probable court-martial for his actions.

Either way, a great man and a great ship have been lost.

That was a brutal scene, and I thought Seth had actually convinced Santiago to relent and come back with him…